Discussion: New Fanfiction: First Love

"If you are easily offended don't read this fanfic. It's a Derek story about his first love and a look into why he might hate the machines so much. The story comes out of flashbacks that Derek has when he is captured and taken to the basement so I had to include the basement story as well.

I also took the liberty of including John and Kyles escape from Skynet(not that it's part of the main story at all but it is mentioned). I'm asking for a little lenency there because I made this happen when Kyle was very young. Think of it as an alternate time line or that maybe it wasn't the only time he was imprisioned in a skynet workcamp with John Connor.

Im not much for writing love stories(and truthfully I don't really consider this one)- and thankfully the love part if over with early. But using the suggestions that others had on the board I thought it might be interesting to write about Derek (after all I usually just kill him off). Thought he deserved a story of his own.

The end may not be considered a twist(I think this one is pretty straight forward but others might have a different opinion). I look at it as being more odd than anything else. You might like it, you might hate it but if you want to read it here's the link.

-http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/First+Love+By+Michelle67d"