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Discussion: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
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 Krazykaleb |
Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 21 2008, 11:30 PM EDT I just made a new fan fiction Called: My New Fate http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat Give me your opinions and suggestions. I would like to make this an area where we can share ideas for my stories. 6 out of 7 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 1:15 PM EDT Hey is anybody going to give me feed back or does my story suck so much that your afraid to say so. 0 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
 udm |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 1:21 PM EDT I read your story 12 hours ago but was wondering where to post lol. So this is the thread for it huh... Wow I like the story. It's different, because it provides a first person perspective from a third party that's totally not involved in the show. Very unique, very original. This is by far my favourite story, because it's what I'd feel too if I were to be the neighbour of a new "family" that acts totally weird I can only imagine how awkward I'd be if I were to walk over to my new neighbours' house to welcome them, and instead of smiling and asking if I want cookies, their daughter asks "What is the purpose of your visit?" lol very good work there kaleb! Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 1:26 PM EDT "I read your story 12 hours ago but was wondering where to post lol. So this is the thread for it huh...Thanks! I plan to make this around 4 to 5 chapters long. It's been a slow work compared to others I've done. But I'm Getting there. I actually working on Chapter three. But I'm gradually going to put the stories up as to get feed back before I post the next one. I want to see were the audience expects me to go with this and then I want to surprise them with somthing they wern't going to expect. Do you find this valuable? |
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udm |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 1:53 PM EDT Anything that's from the perspective of a non-related character is always interesting. Apparently, the Connors' new neighbour has no idea what he's up against ;) Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 2:03 PM EDT "Anything that's from the perspective of a non-related character is always interesting. Apparently, the Connors' new neighbour has no idea what he's up against ;)"Yep he's going to get in a whole world of crap. Do you find this valuable? |
 mg.mikael |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 5:08 PM EDT EXCELLENT, so far, hope you continue it. It provides an intresting view of the Connor's from the point of view of a "normal" person. That is what makes it so intresting, it's never been done before. Do you find this valuable? |
 eelman007 |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 5:27 PM EDT "EXCELLENT, so far, hope you continue it. It provides an intresting view of the Connor's from the point of view of a "normal" person. That is what makes it so intresting, it's never been done before."I could'nt of said it better myself, excellent work mate. Do you find this valuable? |
 Michelle67D |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 5:55 PM EDT "Hey is anybody going to give me feed back or does my story suck so much that your afraid to say so."lol! Patience - we're not all on the forum when you post. Nice work doing the fic from your own perspective. Good job. Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 8:59 PM EDT Thanks for the input guys. I'm working on the details of my next chapters. So that I can keep the continuety I've created hope you look forward to Chapter two. Do you find this valuable? |
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mg.mikael |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 10:13 PM EDT I'm actually looking forward to the next chapters, because it has something to do with the series. And because we have to wait for the television series, this provides a great oasis of TSCC. Do you find this valuable? |
 SusanWillow |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 22 2008, 10:41 PM EDT I like that its from the point of view of a neighbor Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 1:49 AM EDT Hi fan's check out the new chapter to my story hope you all like it. Hope I can keep you guys guessing as to what will happen next. If you haven't already make sure you read chapter 1 first: then on the bottom of the chapter I have a link to chapeter 2. http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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udm |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 3:45 AM EDT "His name was like Reese's Pieces." Just for that, you win at the Internet I like the content, but I think there's some redundant material at the end. As in, it's better to narrate rather than have the flashback at the end, since it feels rather repetitive. Also, some grammer errors here and there But for the most part, your fanfic's still my fave! :D Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 11:41 AM EDT ""His name was like Reese's Pieces."My repeatativeness is show how shocked the character of the story is by what just happened. He is haveing a hard time copeing with all the events. Plus when my little mini-series is over. I'm going to have some of my friends to grammar corrections so don't worry. They will be fixed soon. Do you find this valuable? |
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udm |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 11:49 AM EDT If you want, I could help you edit the grammar mistakes :D Do you find this valuable? |
 john121984 |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 1:14 PM EDT Good story Do you find this valuable? |
 AverageJo |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 2:54 PM EDT Can't seem to keep up with the main forum threads myself, much less all the fanfics, videos, and everything else that gets posted. So I don't have much constructive to add except to say that all guys (and gals) should be looking for some way to cash in on your work. Krazykaleb, IIRC there was a long-ago sitcom, Bewitched, that featured a "normal" person who could never quite convince everyone else of the bizarre goings-on of her supernatural next-door neighbors. Some ideas are timeless... Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 6:03 PM EDT Hi everyone I just added a new chapter to the story. I'm slowly getting to the finish. It's unfortunately becoming a longer story than I initially thought it would. It might be seven to eight chapters long. Here is a link to chapter one and once again if you are a newby read from the beginning please. http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat As always thank you for your guys support in my story. It may not intertwine with season 2 when it comes out. But anyhow I hope to make it interesting for the readers in the end. I also put links at the bottom of each chapter allowing you to go to the next chapters Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 6:05 PM EDT "If you want, I could help you edit the grammar mistakes :D"you can only correct the grammar mistakes. This is all I will allow. I'll be watching you if you do anything funny. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |