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Discussion: Fan Fiction: Checkmate
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 Michelle67D |
Fan Fiction: Checkmate
Apr 18 2008, 5:37 PM EDT I sat on this one for a while - it wasn't one of my personal favorites. Sarah was a lot harder to write for than John. Skynet was given a voice and thought because it was just easier to do it that way.Please don't bust me on the tech part - it's not my thing and I tried to dance around it as best I could so if it doesn't sound too plausible just pretend that it is and read on. This one kinda has a similar theme to the Last Link but is a lot more somber in my opinion.You may like it ...you may hate it but I thought I'd go ahead and put it out there just to finally finish the thing. -http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Checkmate+by+Michelle67d 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
 mg.mikael |
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Apr 18 2008, 8:32 PM EDT A masterpiece, action and a very deep plot. You're fan fiction was great, loved you're prediction for Cameron. Whoever hates it is a narrow-minded. Do you find this valuable? |
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Michelle67D |
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Apr 18 2008, 9:39 PM EDT Thank you for the compliment and for taking the time to read it. Do you find this valuable? |
 SusanWillow |
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Apr 18 2008, 9:52 PM EDT Awesome!! Do you find this valuable? |
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Michelle67D |
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Apr 18 2008, 9:57 PM EDT "Awesome!!"Thanks. Glad you liked it. Do you find this valuable? |
 john121984 |
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Apr 18 2008, 11:34 PM EDT That was great. The best one yet. Do you find this valuable? |
 udm |
RE: Fan Fiction: Checkmate
Apr 19 2008, 2:02 AM EDT OMG why did you have to kill off Sarah Connor :( I liked the story though. It's really quite good, and well thought out. I just didn't like Sarah being killed off, even if its non-canon :p Do you find this valuable? |
 intrepid |
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Apr 19 2008, 3:05 AM EDT This is the 2nd story of yours I’ve read, and I have to say I have enjoyed both immensely and I don’t usually enjoy short stories (anything under 500 pages I consider a “short” story) and you did quite fine on the tech so not to worry, keep up the good work!!! :) Do you find this valuable? |
 pb67 |
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Apr 19 2008, 5:01 AM EDT Really good, thanks for posting that. I didn't notice any "tech" stuff, the drama and characterisation were so good it wasn't important, and you still managed to create a sense of mystery about Cameron, just like the series! Do you find this valuable? |
 randomicity912 |
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Apr 19 2008, 8:14 AM EDT I thought it was really good. Do you find this valuable? |
 Balderdash |
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Apr 19 2008, 8:19 AM EDT I thought this was a sterling piece of work with good characterisation and an interesting plot. Loved how you handled Skynet and enjoyed the twist. I think this story would make a good series finale. Do you find this valuable? |
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Michelle67D |
RE: Fan Fiction: Checkmate
Apr 19 2008, 9:28 AM EDT "OMG why did you have to kill off Sarah Connor :(It's just me - for some reason I usually wind up killing someone. But it does have a little significance in that Sarah sacrificed herself to save John just as Emi(in a round about way) was sacrificed to save Skynet. You could say each side had their Queen sacrificed. Do you find this valuable? |
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Michelle67D |
RE: Fan Fiction: Checkmate
Apr 19 2008, 9:28 AM EDT Thank you everybody for all your nice comments and for taking the time to read it. Do you find this valuable? |
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udm |
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Apr 19 2008, 11:40 AM EDT Well, you lose some, you gain some Overall, I think it's a great story though. Nice one Michelle! Do you find this valuable? |
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nw80 nw80 |
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Apr 19 2008, 12:14 PM EDT Great story, I really liked it...But you know what it means right? that you have to write some for :) Do you find this valuable? |
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nw80 nw80 |
RE: Fan Fiction: Checkmate
Apr 19 2008, 12:16 PM EDT "Great story, I really liked it...But you know what it means right? that you have to write some for :)"I meant some more. Do you find this valuable? |
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Michelle67D |
RE: Fan Fiction: Checkmate
Apr 19 2008, 12:56 PM EDT "I meant some more."I think we all miss an edit button. But thank you all for your kind comments. Do you find this valuable? |
