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CameronsWiffy	Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 25 2008, 9:45 PM EDT Cameron sees someone kiss at prom. And she asks John why people kiss. And he says he "they just do." Then later she is outside with Morris and he tries to kiss her but she gets out of it without hurting him though. Just freaking him out. Then later at home John asks Cameron, "Why did you have to flip Morris out, you should have just kissed him like a regular person." And Cameron's reply is, 'It just didn't feel right." John replies, "What?" Cameron repeats her statement. John then asks, "How could you feel that?" Cameron replies, "I don't know. It just didn't feel right." John comes further into Cameron's room. He says, "You can feel." Cameron says, "I'm starting to." Cameron says, "Aren't you supposed to dance at prom?" John says, "Yes." Cameron replies, "I didn't get to dance." John asks Cameron if she would like to dance. She says, "Yes." John turns on music (which just so happens to be slow). He takes her left hand and puts her right arm on on his shoulder and his arm around her waist. They dance for a little. John brings Cameron closer. They stare into each other's eyes. Cameron says, "This feels right." John leans in and kisses her. Standing in the doorway is Derek. He stands there stunned. Cameron quickly notices Derek and slightly but quickly pushes John away. Derek says, "What the hell were you doing?" Cameron says, "It felt right." Cameron leaves her own room as Derek stands there amazed at John. Derek says, "She's a MACHINE." John says, "She's a LEARNING machine" Derek says, "She's tricking you. This is over, she's done." John says, "You listen to me. You will not touch her. And that's an order." Derek says, "You're crazy Connor. You have no idea..." Post reply 13 out of 15 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 25 2008, 9:47 PM EDT Weeks before John and Cameron go to prom he teaches her about music. He tells her, "When people sings, it's usually a sign of happiness." And he can explain how singing is sometimes uncontrolable. Okay. So this scene could take place after the scene I wrote where John and Cameron kiss after dancing in her room. The next day Cameron is roaming around the house singing the song that played while her and John kisses. Sarah comes across and says, "What are you doing?" Cameron states, "Singing is the universal sign of happiness." And Sarah just looks at her confused, She says, "Happiness? But you don't feel happiness." Then Cameron snaps back and says, "Who are you to say what I can or can't do?" John comes out of his room and says, "Did I hear singing?" Sarah says, "Your metal friend thinks she can feel happiness." John replies, "That's not all she can feel." Sarah questions him but he just plays it off like it's nothing. Derek comes in and says, "Our metal friend here is capable of a lot." John quickly glares at him. Sarah begins to make pancakes while everyone else sits at the table. John says to Derek, "I thought you said you'd keep your mouth shut." Derek says, "I am. I just think we should be aware of your metal friend's capable." Cameron says, "I'm capable of a lot of things." Derek looks at her and says (contradicting himself) "I don't even want to know." John and Cameron head off to school. Cameron begins singing again. John asks what she is doing and she replies, "Singing is the universal sign of happiness." John replies, "And what are you happy about?" She says, "Our kiss." Post reply 9 out of 9 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 25 2008, 9:48 PM EDT John says to Cameron, "Yeah, well you can't let my mom know about that..." Cameron replies, "I know. She will be deeply angered." John then asks Cameron, "Why did you kiss me? I didn't think terminators would supposed to do that?" She replies, "We're not. But it felt like the thing to do during that moment." He looks at her, a tad bit confused, but being the teenage boy he is, he asks, "Did you like it." Cameron smiles at John and they continue to walk towards school. After a normal day at school John asks Cameron if he can take her somewhere. She agrees and they walk to a beautiful lake where the sun is setting. Cameron walks towards the lake and stares and says, "It's beautiful." John says, "I thought you'd like it." Cameron says, "It doesn't look like this in the future." John says, "You've been here before?" Cameron replies, "Yes, you brought me here in the future. Except you were upset. You told me you use to come here as a child with your mom and would go fishing all day until the sun set. You told me the sun was so beautiful and wished you could show me. I've always wanted to see this, thank you John." Cameron turns to John and says, "We must go. Your mother will freak if we're out much longer." John sighs and they begin to walk home. They walk rather close on the way home. John asks Cameron, "So are we like best friends in the future?" Cameron says, "You could call it that." John replies, "You're kind of like my best friend now..." Cameron smiles and takes John by the hand. John ruins the moment by saying, "This is so weird." Cameron says, "Humans can not control their emotions." John replies, "But you're not a human." Cameron replies, "But I have emotions." Post reply 8 out of 8 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 25 2008, 9:48 PM EDT John stares her amazed but confused. He says, "But you're a..." She replies, "I'm different." John replies, "You're telling me..." They end up on the porch of their house. The sun is still setting and the way is shines on Cameron's face enhances every beautiful feature she has. They stand on the porch a moment. John continues to look at Cameron as she gazes at the beautiful sun set. He says, "For my protector, you sure do drive me to do crazy things." She says, "Crazy things?" He replies, "Yes..." And comes closer to her and takes his hand and puts it on her face, caressing it ever so gently. He then leans in and kisses her softy. She kisses him back. After a moment or two their beautiful love scene is ruined as Sarah walks up to the porch. She yells, "JOHN!" They stop. They are both startled to see her. Sarah says, "So these are your capabilities? Tricking my son into falling for you so he will get off track of his mission!" Cameron says, "No, that is not apart of my mission." Sarah says, "Then what is your mission." Cameron says, "To ensure the lives of John and Sarah Connor." Sarah replies, "Then why are you kissing my son?" John replies, "Because it felt right." John storms inside. Sarah tells Cameron, "Just because you don't have a heart doesn't mean John doesn't have one. I will not stand around and watch him ponder over some heartless machine." Cameron replies, "But I want one..." (referring to a heart). Post reply 6 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 25 2008, 10:30 PM EDT Cameron then continues her statement, "The tin man had a heart all along. He just didn't know it." Sarah looks angrily at Cameron and walks in the door. Derek sees her and says, "So I guess you know about John and the tin man?" Post reply 8 out of 8 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Schmacky	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 3:04 AM EDT shakes head I'm sorry but... shakes head Lovely of you to try and write that though. Post reply 0 out of 5 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Majarvis	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 7:35 AM EDT "shakes head I'm sorry but... shakes head Lovely of you to try and write that though." I thought it was pretty good. I don't think it really goes with what the show is trying to do though, it's too soft, too sweet, but it was a good read. Post reply 5 out of 5 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Shadoware	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 8:44 AM EDT I hope Cameron dont be used like those sex bots in the fantastic ghost in the shell anime, but some aspects could be explored, if Cameron could start to learn to feel or to love, she could be kind of revolution in cybernetic world and if she could influence other machines, this could mean a rebelion inside a rebelion, a faction inside machine world that could fight for the humans. If there's space to this kind of thing in terminator story, it would be cool. P.S. What is that slang used to say that something is cool? Cameron used it when John spoke about a bullet proof jacket his mother gave to him. Sounds like "tight" to me. English is crasy lol. Post reply 0 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
LiquidMetal	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 9:02 AM EDT IMHO I don't think we will ever see this. Post reply 0 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Schmacky	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 11:01 AM EDT "I thought it was pretty good. I don't think it really goes with what the show is trying to do though, it's too soft, too sweet, but it was a good read." [So these are your capabilities? Tricking my son into falling for you so he will get off track of his mission!" ] That was pretty much why I shook my head. First off, I don't think the whole scene would ever happen. She/he did a fair enough job writing it, there were mistakes but they're forgiveable. But that quote of Sarah's is so unlike anybody on that show. I don't think she would be concerned of him getting off track of the "mission" if he were to kill Cameron. I think she'd be a liiiiittle PO'd about other things. It just seemed weird. Didn't feel right. Post reply 0 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
FrenchFanofTSCC	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 12:22 PM EDT love your story,hope it happen !!!!!!! Post reply 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
LiquidMetal	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 3:14 PM EDT Might need some 3in1 oil! :) Post reply 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 10:59 PM EDT "[So these are your capabilities? Tricking my son into falling for you so he will get off track of his mission!" ] That was pretty much why I shook my head. First off, I don't think the whole scene would ever happen. She/he did a fair enough job writing it, there were mistakes but they're forgiveable. But that quote of Sarah's is so unlike anybody on that show. I don't think she would be concerned of him getting off track of the "mission" if he were to kill Cameron. I think she'd be a liiiiittle PO'd about other things. It just seemed weird. Didn't feel right." Oh, I don't think the scene will happen either. But this is why I posted this in the FAN FICTION area. I wish it would happen however. And what do you mean I did a fair job? I think I did a damn good job. And what mistakes? I know it's not the angle the show is going for. But I just thought it would be cool if it happened. And who ever said John were to kill Cameron? He'd never do that. They're best friends. They need one another. And they both know the need for one another. So isn't that some form of love?? Post reply 3 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 11:00 PM EDT "Might need some 3in1 oil! :)" I hope! Post reply 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 26 2008, 11:01 PM EDT "[So these are your capabilities? Tricking my son into falling for you so he will get off track of his mission!" ] That was pretty much why I shook my head. First off, I don't think the whole scene would ever happen. She/he did a fair enough job writing it, there were mistakes but they're forgiveable. But that quote of Sarah's is so unlike anybody on that show. I don't think she would be concerned of him getting off track of the "mission" if he were to kill Cameron. I think she'd be a liiiiittle PO'd about other things. It just seemed weird. Didn't feel right." And I'm a she! And yes, I am in love with Cameron. =) Post reply 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
GoldenBuffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 29 2008, 2:55 AM EDT That's the beauty of fanfic we can place the characters in any situation and try to make it work. If it gets the reader to even ponder the possiblilty, then you did your job. You did well. I enjoyed reading them. Thanks! Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Schmacky	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 29 2008, 3:10 AM EDT "Oh, I don't think the scene will happen either. But this is why I posted this in the FAN FICTION area. I wish it would happen however. And what do you mean I did a fair job? I think I did a damn good job. And what mistakes? I know it's not the angle the show is going for. But I just thought it would be cool if it happened. And who ever said John were to kill Cameron? He'd never do that. They're best friends. They need one another. And they both know the need for one another. So isn't that some form of love??" Damn this place for not being able to edit. I never meant the word kill. I meant KISS lol. don't be offended that i wasn't blown away by your piece. As a writer, you should be able to take criticism. I can make it constructive, if you'd like. Third sentence, [And he says he "they just do."] I'm sure you can see the mistake there. If you were trying for it to be like a story, it doesn't flow every well. You're telling us when you should be SHOWING us. You want to create a scene that we can visualize in our head. Your style of writing is "This happens. And then that happens. Someone asks, "lalalal?" And another person replies, "Dadada." That's boring. There's no detail. There's no feeling. Do you understand what I'm saying. I'm going to give an example, but don't consider this me saying I can write better. I don't even like to write, but this is just an example. I'm going to change around your first paragraph. ---------------------- During prom, Cameron spied a couple kissing in the dark corner of the room. She turns to John and asks, "Why do people kiss?" John replies with a shrug, "I don't know. They just do." Returning her attention to the young couple, Cameron seems to accept the answer. For the time being. Later in the evening, Morris walks Cameron outside for some fresh air. His hands are dug deep in his pockets, a small smile playing on his lips. "Sooooooooo..." "Yes?" Cameron asks nonchalantly. "Nothing." Before he can lose his nerve, Morris bounces a little on his toes and tries to lay a kiss on Cameron's sweet inviting lips. Or, so he thought they were inviting. ------- I'm running out of characters so I'll stop there. My point is, show us. Don't tell us. Let words decorate what you want to happen. Post reply 0 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
VodkaPowered	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 29 2008, 3:10 AM EDT too long to read XD not gonna happen, this tv show is sci-fi, not playboy tv channel program nor some sex channel show thus i refuse to read that long of a story :P Post reply 0 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
VodkaPowered	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 29 2008, 3:22 AM EDT "And I'm a she! And yes, I am in love with Cameron. =)" i think lokens ( T-X) is a lesbian, probably better luck than summer? :P Post reply 0 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
CameronsWiffy	RE: Possible John and Cameron love scenes... Mar 29 2008, 12:46 PM EDT "too long to read XD not gonna happen, this tv show is sci-fi, not playboy tv channel program nor some sex channel show thus i refuse to read that long of a story :P" EXCUSE ME SIR! But HOW DARE you try to say my scenes would be something that would be aired on Playboy? If you weren't such a lazy ass and would have actually read the scenes before giving your two cents (which is so stupid. You don't give your opinion on something with out reading it first. That's like saying a book sucks with out even reading it. You doofus.) then you would have seen that my scenes are not that of a SEX scene of something even going to SEX. My scenes had NOTHING to do with sex. You pervert. You're obviously the one wishing to view a horrible sex scene between John and Cameron. What I was going for was a BEAUTIFUL, SWEET, ROMANTIC, LOVE scene. LOVE!!! SO! Next time before you try to insult something, READ IT. Post reply 6 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?

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