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eelman007 |
What the hell happened
Mar 24 2008, 6:38 PM EDT I find myself in a dark back alley, on the other side of a low wall I see some clothes on a washing line and grab a shirt and tracksuit pants and put them on the I spot a pair of runners, good my size what luck. I move down the alley towards the noise I can hear as i come around a left hand corner I can see a city street full of people its night time (late, the moon is high) , I see a man reading something it has a large picture on the front and some words - Tibet protesters mar lighting of Olympic torch- then I see the day/date " Monday 25th March 2008 " I read futher - what the hell - this paper is the Courier Mail- Brisbane Australia, what happened how could I be in Australia. Behind me I hear something that chills me to my bones, dogs barking i look around and see a group of men in uniform (im thinking law enforcement officers) and thier 2 dogs are barking at a tall well built man walking past them, only one reason they would be barking but why would skynet send a terminator here, it could not know that I am here. I dont even know why im here and not in L.A. I start to follow metal head at a distance, I want to find out why he is here and what his mission is, this will give me time to get some weapons and figure out a way to kill him. I watch him as he climbs into a prime mover with trailer, I move to the rear of the trailer and find a large storage compartment and climb in just as the truck starts to move. After about half an hour the truck stops, I can hear voices ( hard to make out the full coversation but i got the part of the shipment is ready for transport. Slowly I open the lid of the compartment just enough to see out, i glance around to see a large open shed , to my shock and horror it holds 10 crates of coltrane, son of a bitch skynet is setting up a base here in Australia, well not if I have anything to say about it. 3 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Majarvis |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 24 2008, 6:56 PM EDT "... to my shock and horror it holds 10 crates of coltrane..."It's "coltan", not coltran, not coltrane, not coltane; it's coltan. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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DrMabuse DrMabuse |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 24 2008, 6:56 PM EDT My eyes grow weary. I backside feels like it's about to fall off. I have been sitting and waiting in my rathole for 2 days straight waiting for something to happen. So far the most exciting thing was watching junkies buying their smack and shooting it up their veins. Suddenly I hear a truck approaching. It stops 50 metres away. Looking through my nightgoogles confirms it. My target has finally arrived. Looks like it's time to go to work. Do you find this valuable? |
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whackman |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 24 2008, 8:37 PM EDT um...¿ Do you find this valuable? |
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eelman007 |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 25 2008, 12:17 AM EDT Thank you Majarvis for pointing out my error. Do you find this valuable? |
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eelman007 |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 25 2008, 5:30 PM EDT There must be enough coltan to build at least 200 endos, again I can hear voices it sounds like someone is a bit pissed off then a single gun shot and a loud terrifide voice saying WTF, a scream of pure blood chilling terror and finally scilence. I watch as metal head carrys the body into the shed and drops it into what must be a pit or some thing, he then picked up a crate of coltan and started heading for the rear of the truck, I gently close the lid and listen as the trucks suspension groans with the new load after ten minutes or so the endo finnishes loading the truck and closes the rear doors with a loud bang I can hear his footsteps moving away from me at a fast pace so again I open the lid to take a look where I see metal head enter an adjoing building. I climb out and head straight for the empty shed where i find a stair case leading down wards and at the bottom I can see the body of a male, I proceed down the stairs and check the body for a pulse, nothing his neck is broken. As I look up and around I find myself in a large room full of weapons, ammo and millitary combat clothing,I hear footsteps above in the shed, this is it this is where metal heads mission comes to an abrupt end. I reach for two grenades pull both the pins, release the arming leverswait two seconds and gent ly lob them up into the shed I hear them hit the concrete floor and then BOOM!!! , I watch as one of the terminators legs lands on the floor beside me, then i hear a noise like something being dragged I reach for a 12guage shot gun and load it whilst climbing the stairs slowly, I see the endo dragging itself along the floor towards me with its right arm, its left one smashed and barely attached with a solitary wire. The endo stops and looks up at me, I look straight into its eyes "well you piece of shit I bet this part was'nt in your mission profile, when you killed 6 billion of us you should of made sure I was one of them " , now you are marked for termination. Do you find this valuable? |
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DrMabuse DrMabuse |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 25 2008, 7:07 PM EDT Getting ready to go to work. Tools? Check! Weapons? Fully loaded! One last quik look to asses the situation. All looks good. BANG!!! The target takes out his henchman. Good. Less for me to do. I sit tight and wait for the target to finish loading the shipment. After it's finished I watch it enter the shed. Alrighty. Let's get a move. I start getting up when I notice a sudden movement from the corner of my eyes. What the...?? I fall back into my hole and take a look through my goggles. This wasn't in my intell. I see a male figure follow the target into the shed. What now??? A drifter maybe who was looking to catch a ride? I wait and a few minutes later I hear a loud explosion. Ok. What to do? Continue with my mission? Hmmm....I guess I can always come back for the target later. The mission it is. I get up quikly and make my way to the vehicle. I close the open lid and get into the driverscabin. I don't have to use my tools to start the car. The target was nice enough to leave the keys in the ignition. How thoughtfull of him I grin to myself. Alright. On to the next phase it is. I wonder who the figure was who follwed the target into the shedt. Ah well. He's most likely dead now or will be very soon I think to myself as I drive into the night. Do you find this valuable? |
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eelman007 |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 25 2008, 9:01 PM EDT Sudenly my attention is diverted to the out side of the shed, I hear a car start up and begin to drive off. I run out side to see a 4WD speeding down the road away from the compound, oh! shit metal head is still active in side so I head back in and finnish off the endo. Finding a pair of pliers on a shelf I remove its CPU and smash it with a metal rod from its arm, then I hot wire a fork lift and use it to load the enod into the trailer with the coltan, right time to get some more fire power. I head back down the stairs and find to large empty green canvas bags, hmm what to take ah! a 9mm grenade launcher nice and 20 rounds should do, then I spot a L1A1 SLR (7.62mm "308")500 rounds for that should do it, next I grab a M60 and two boxes of ammo 1000 rounds, i grab that bag walk out to the truck and store it in the rear of the cabin ok now for the next lot, I head back into the shed and as I approach the stairs I hear a car coming, its the same 4WD that left only ten minutes ago, I run down the stairs and grab an M16 and load a mag and cock the weapon, I hear the car come to a stop at the sheds entrance and then the door opens and foot steps come towards me I take a quick look and I see a male figure tall carrying a M203 at the ready, is he human or a terminator. I yell out stop where you are and put the wepon on the ground, and no silly stuff I have the scar on your forehead in my sight, now place the weapon down and take 10 steps back. He complies with my directions and then asks who the hell are you, I walk up the stairs and the first words this male figure says is " well your not the one Im hunting, oh! really whys that I reply, because if you were you would of killed me before I even got out of the car, i pulled off the road about a mile out and decided to take a look back here through my night vision goggles, and when i seen a figure much shorter than my target I decided to come back. Do you find this valuable? |
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GoldenBuffy |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 25 2008, 9:35 PM EDT It's dark and I'm in the middle of nowhere. I kick at a small sized stone off the side of the road and curse to myself. Stupid. Stupid. Stupid. "It'll be fun!" she said. "We only have senior spring break once." she said. AHHHH, dammit. And soon as we get out to the middle of nowhere to "party" with some Aussies we met they all run off leaving me out here. If I ever make it back to the hotel, Karen is so dead! I should have never left LA. I shiver. My cell phone is dead and I haven't seen a car for ages. I'm about to give up and cry when I hear what sounds like a car coming towards me. I see head lights. YES! I'm saved. I start to wave my arms frantically in the air hoping the driver will stop. The car is speeding and to my amazement they don't slow down only continue on pass me. Out of share rage I bend down adn pick up a larger rock and through it at the car with all my strength, "Asshole!" The rock actually hits the car, breaking out the back window. What luck! That'll teach him to ignore me. The car suddenly stops, then reverses. I want to run and hide. I mean, I did just shatter the jerk's window. The window rolls down and he glares at me. I'm tempted to just ignore him, but I'm cold, and sacred and have no idea where I am. I paste on my best smile and quickly babble my story. Please, oh, please, let him give me a ride. I just want to get back home. Do you find this valuable? |
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eelman007 |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 25 2008, 11:29 PM EDT Well coming back here was a mistake, I strongly suggest you get back in the car and go where ever you are headed, so he picks up his weapon , climbs into the car and takes off. I wait untill the cars tail lights vanish from sight and then proceed back down the stairs to load up the other bag and swap my clothes for some combat gear, and also pack a couple of extra pairs of pants / shirts. I load that into the rear of the cabin and then start the truck up and head north. Do you find this valuable? |
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GoldenBuffy |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 26 2008, 8:25 AM EDT I get out of the car and I'm now better off than I was before, still not close enough to my hotel but near civilization - a gas sataion - and a pay phone. I'm about to call when I notice a truck pull up to one of the self serve pumps and a young man gets out. He's wearing combat gear. He looks familiar to me. I watch as he gets out the cabin and enters the tiny store to pay for his gas, then as he heads back to his truck. he pauses and looks at me breifly before continuing on his way. My feet move on their own and I approach him. He turns around quickly assuming a fighting stance, now he's sizing me up, seeing if I pose any threat to him. I simply stand there looking him once over more closely. He regards me with a look of impatientness. I stand five feet from him and say; "I'm from LA." Do you find this valuable? |
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FrenchFanofTSCC |
about the COLTAN GUYS !
Mar 26 2008, 12:36 PM EDT its in every Mobile phone right now and its Radio Actif (Dangerous) when its get HOT ! do you know that ! i have find on a serious web site !!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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eelman007 |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 26 2008, 6:55 PM EDT I turn on the radio and search through the stations to find some decent music, ah! thats it " Copper Head Road" starts to play as I listen to the music my thoughts drift back to the person I had a brief encounter with, who was he and what the hell was he doing there, ah! well no use dwelling on it. Now what to do with this load of coltan and metal head, I know I have to make it dissapear but how and where. I pull off the road into a rest area, time to get some sleep and clear my head, first I check that the doors on the trailer are locked and secure, I light up a cigarette from a packet i found in the truck, smoke finnished I drop it to the ground and stamp out the butt with my right boot, then i climb back into the truck lock the doors and climb into the rear to get some sleep, as I drift off the dreams/nightmares return. - Im hiking in the mountains when im surrounded by a sudden bright flash, within a second I hear a massive kaboom from behind me, as I turn to see what it is I hear the same noise coming from North, South and West of me, what the hell then my eyes catch a massive mushroom cloud ascending into the sky above the city that was my home, the site terrifies me to the bones I cannot move, its like Im frozen in time watching this massive explosion envelop my home, my family and my friends , I hope and pray that they did not suffer and thier death was quick. Im woken by a large banging noise on the door of the truck, Im sweating perviuslyand shaking. I climb to the front of the truck and open the door, standing at the side is a elderly couple the man proceeds to tell me that thier car had broken down and would it be possible for me to send a a mechanic back from the next town about two miles away when i get there, sure not a prolem I reply. As I climb down out of the truck to light another cigarette a car comes roaring into the rest area, instinct tells me this cannot be good. Do you find this valuable? |
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eelman007 |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 26 2008, 11:55 PM EDT The car comes to a grinding stop, and as the tall woman steps out of the car the old couples dog starts barking at her, bugger another one. I quickly climb into the truck and grab the SLR and 2 extra mags as I do I can hear the elderly woman screaming, the gun shots and then scilence, I lean out the window of the truck and squeeze off five quick rounds at the chest and head of the terminator, nocking it to the ground and busting one of its eyes, i start up the truck and reverse over its legs where they connect to the pelvic structer smashing both legs. Climbing down from the truck I reach for a large steel bar tied to the side of the trailer, i walk up to the terminator that is pinned under the rear wheels, standing just out of its reach I crouch down and spit right in its face, it just stares at me and tells my my efforts are futile, the end is coming for the humans and the machine is the only one who will rise from the ashes, I reply well goes to show you how wrong you are (I roll up my sleve and show metal head my barcode) yeh! thats right Im from the future as well, I escaped one of your work camps and now Im here doing my best to make sure skynet never gets created or atleast be a complete pain in the ass to it. I stand back up and with a almighty swing I smash the terminators right arm and then its left, grabing a pair of pliers from the toll box I grab the terminators head and rip out its CPU, drop it on the ground and smash it with the steel bar, I quickly move the truck off the now deactivated terminator and quickly load it into the back of the truck in pieces and drive off, there is nothing I can do for the elderly couple they are both dead I feel sick for just leaving them there but time is my enemy and I still have to figure out how to make a few things dissapear, then I see a road sign Grants Scenic Look out over looking Stevenson Dam Turn Left 200meters. Do you find this valuable? |
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Wild-Kat |
RE: What the hell happened
Mar 27 2008, 4:28 PM EDT Hey Eelman, thanks for getting the ball rolling. I transferred your content to it's own page under Fan Fiction where it's good for more additions. Hope this will start a trend! Do you find this valuable? |
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Michelle67D |
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Mar 29 2008, 8:58 PM EDT Eelman, I finally read your story. I'm not one much for character role play in a fanfic but I have to admit this was pretty interesting. I loved the way you got rid of the coltan - blowing it up in a tunnel in the mountain side. The touch about the gas was nice too -- ready and prepared to take out any machine you run into but almost done under by running out of gas. Added a nice human element to the story -- as well as the elderly couple that got killed. Nice job. I'm going to try and put in a link to your story so if people click onto this thread they can easily get there. -http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Fan+Fiction%3A+What+the+Hell+Happened Do you find this valuable? |
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Michelle67D |
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Apr 1 2008, 8:07 PM EDT Read your alternate endings. Like all of them but especially the one where you close your eyes with the gun pointed at you. Do you find this valuable? |
