First Love By Michelle67d

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Change: Weeks earlier he had lost his brother to the machines and in a failed attempt to rescue him, Derek had almost been captured himself. Aided   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 0)

Change: rag doll Derek lay in the corner. His strength..his life had been drained from him and for what...to regrow skin on one of those stinking machines.Derek could feel the anger rising within him. He thought about all   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5848)

Change: Weeks earlier he had lost his brother to the machines and in a failed attempt to rescue him, Derek had almost been captured himself. Aided   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5845)